Writing in 2nd person, wait what

[Jegerkajisawesome]

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7433246/1/A_Rainbow_On_A_Sunny_Day

^ Seriously, that is scary. Also, someone named "Shadow The Furry King" rated it 5 stars out of 5 - wonder why :D

[Okocise]

And i thought my spelling and grammar were horrible.

[Jegerkajisawesome]

It is an, ehm, INTERESTING story nonetheless :D Also, for a first, she's kind of slutty.

"You kidnapped me while I was unconscious and then proceeded to give me some cheap fastfood? FUCK ME!"

Yeah...

as a little explosion of magic goes off in Dash's mouth - I call innuendos

... And grabs your... well, you can guess. <- I call kindergarten

bean with her - The spelling is what makes the story <3